I appreciate the thought-provoking feedback.
“The ability to choose words, use rhetorical devices, and build sentences and paragraphs that have depth and originality,” are the resultant effect of being exposed to things or a world where such things—or what brings about them, are found, however young we may be.
Without the concept or having never seen a plane fly in the sky, a child in a remote village, will never dream of becoming a pilot.
Hence my point, that gifted writers are the sum of all the aforementioned points in the essay. Simply put, there’s a labour for refinement, whether sophisticatedly or simplistically, that sets gifted writers apart.