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Impressive!!!

Michelle, do you advice completely cutting adjectives and adverbs or it’s best to use them sparingly, finding when and where they fit.

Because, sometimes, when adjectives and adverbs are completely out, a piece reads like telling with no showing.

What’s your thought on this?

Brilliant piece by the way!

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George Blue Kelly
George Blue Kelly

Written by George Blue Kelly

Musings of an immigrant from a tiny Sicilian village.

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